Way to make an interesting world boringTough read。 Too much noise, no character。 Please focus on plot not everything needs to be explainedWas looking forward to this and didn't enjoy it。 Way to make an interesting world boringTough read。 Too much noise, no character。 Please focus on plot not everything needs to be explainedWas looking forward to this and didn't enjoy it。 。。。more
Kelly Stading,
Progression fantasy This series has gotten a lot better in the most recent books。 This one had a lot of skill progression and fighting, but still had some management of the main story in a few concise chapters。 I liked that better than the business building that the first few books focused on。
Logwarrior,
Excellent SeriesI've grown fond of the main character。 Really looking forward to his next interaction with the elves。 Book is well worth the read。 Excellent SeriesI've grown fond of the main character。 Really looking forward to his next interaction with the elves。 Book is well worth the read。 。。。more
Roberto Flores,
I detested the dungeon run in book four。It was filler that wasted only set off an event。 This book, being the rest of the run, was boring。 Nothing but drawn out set up。 I am looking forward to book six where we can get back to the actual storyline。
Tom Maxey,
Great series! Have enjoyed this series immensely! I haughty received。
Zack Turner,
Fanfreakingtastic!Fantastic book! I loved this book! Such amazing character development。 I simply can not wait for the next book to come out!
JERMIKAL HAMILTON,
a great read I’m home sick and I got through the whole thing in one day。。 We get more great action and finally some answers about the MCs powers and rewards。 We make some progress with the war but it’s not quite wrapped up yet so I’m sure Dereck will get to test out some new skills on the battlefield。 Can’t wait for the next book
William Howe,
WHERE’S MY HASENPFEFFER?!?!!?Silvi is ridiculously awesome。 Some really neat glimpses into the backbone of the ‘system’。Mostly still in the raid dungeon, though there are a few chapters for people on the outside。Now we begin the wait for the next book…
Jonathan,
PLEASE GET THIS PROOFREAD!It's a fun little overpowered MC story, combined with a fish out of water setting and a light sprinkling of RPG stats。 But dear gods does it need a proofreader or copy editor。 The words "lighting" and "lightning" are NOT interchangeable, nor are "of" & "have", nor "duel" & "dual", to give just a few examples。Further, this volume starts midway through a dungeon run begun in the previous volume, and ends when the dungeon does, which makes it feel like a bit of a bait-and- PLEASE GET THIS PROOFREAD!It's a fun little overpowered MC story, combined with a fish out of water setting and a light sprinkling of RPG stats。 But dear gods does it need a proofreader or copy editor。 The words "lighting" and "lightning" are NOT interchangeable, nor are "of" & "have", nor "duel" & "dual", to give just a few examples。Further, this volume starts midway through a dungeon run begun in the previous volume, and ends when the dungeon does, which makes it feel like a bit of a bait-and-switch, since you get very little advance on the story, apart from some world-building exposition。All in all, a good editor would do wonders for this book。 。。。more
Javarnie,
I was hoping they would have left the dungeon sooner